Amazing Writers in Rata Toru
I went to the park and Dad and Mum
and my brother went on the slide.
By Paige
I am sad because Nibbles ran away.
That's why I'm sad. Nibbles is my rabbit.
By Emma
In the school holidays I went to Palmerston
North. They had a pool but I didn't go to the
pool. I went to the shops. In the shop I got a
toy and the toy was called Bumble Bee the
Transformer. Then I went home and played
with my toy.
By Trey
We got a new slide and it was fun. We
liked it and Brooke and Kate liked it too.
By Bryden
Wow! what lovely writing - Jenna
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your stories - Dylani
I liked your story Trey - Finn